That's actually really good!! It's harder to shot a video under a minute then many may think. You had text and lots of action shots. Kept my full attention.
Here is one I did as an example. Not near as good as yours! My challenge...to try and sum up a year of fishing in under 30 seconds. I started with some bass boat/bass fishing action, then creek homemade yak fishing, to bank creek fishing, to small sharks in the bays (sucker almost got my ankle!). To the cruising with homies with some good ole pier fishing. Was that all I did for the year, heck no, but again I only had 30 seconds!